本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛根据TWE的评分标准(见下), 我们看到5分的作文除了要求generally well-organized and well-developed 和uses details to support a thesis or illustrate idea 之外还要求displays facility in the use of language, demonstrates some syntactic variety and range of vocabulary. 这正是和4分的差别.
我们也看到即使6分的文章也允许犯小错. 评分实际上更注重你对语言的驾驭能力, 例如句式的变换, 词汇的运用, 所以只写简单句, 用简单词汇可以不犯错误, 但得分只能4-5分.
大家注意, 网上的有些范文写的不错, 原作者的功底很好. 但如果按TWE评分不一定拿高分, 甚至有可能得很底的分数. 因为有的文章犯了策略性的错误: 比如写了5段, 在短短的30分钟内, 一般写4段即可, 如果非要写5段, 那末就容易每段写的不够充分, 按评分标准就是not well-developed, 比如第二段和第三段短, 相反第四段又过长. LD说, 她有个同学就为此付出了沉重的代价, 本来想写5段, 稳拿6分, 结果只得了4.5分, 而平时的她的作文都是5.5到6分, 后来又不的不重考了一遍, 才拿到6分.
下面是TWE的评分标准:
TOEFL Scoring Guide
Score of 6
A typical essay at this level:
effectively addresses the writing task
is well organized and well developed
uses clearly appropriate details to support a thesis or illustrate ideas
displays consistent facility in the use of language
demonstrates syntactic variety and appropriate word choice, though it may have occasional errors
Score of 5
A typical essay at this level:
may address some parts of the task more effectively than others
is generally well-organized and well-developed
uses details to support a thesis or illustrate idea
displays facility in the use of language
demonstrates some syntactic variety and range of vocabulary, though it will probably have occasional errors
Score of 4
A typical essay at this level:
addresses the writing topic adequately but may slight parts of the task
is adequately organized and developed
uses some details to support a thesis or illustrate an idea
demonstrates adequate but possibly inconsistent facility with syntax and usage
may contain some errors that occasionally obscure meaning
Score of 3
A typical essay at this level may reveal one or more or the following weaknesses:
inadequate organization or development
inappropriate or insufficient details to support or illustrate generalizations
a noticeably inappropriate choice of words or word forms
an accumulation of errors in sentence structure and/or usage
Score of 2
A typical essay at this level is flawed by one or more of the following weaknesses:
serious disorganization or underdevelopment
little or no detail, or irrelevant specifics
serious and frequent errors in sentence structure and usage
serious problems with focus
Score of 1
A typical essay at this level:
may be incoherent
may be undeveloped
may contain severe or persistent writing errors更多精彩文章及讨论，请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
我们也看到即使6分的文章也允许犯小错. 评分实际上更注重你对语言的驾驭能力, 例如句式的变换, 词汇的运用, 所以只写简单句, 用简单词汇可以不犯错误, 但得分只能4-5分.
大家注意, 网上的有些范文写的不错, 原作者的功底很好. 但如果按TWE评分不一定拿高分, 甚至有可能得很底的分数. 因为有的文章犯了策略性的错误: 比如写了5段, 在短短的30分钟内, 一般写4段即可, 如果非要写5段, 那末就容易每段写的不够充分, 按评分标准就是not well-developed, 比如第二段和第三段短, 相反第四段又过长. LD说, 她有个同学就为此付出了沉重的代价, 本来想写5段, 稳拿6分, 结果只得了4.5分, 而平时的她的作文都是5.5到6分, 后来又不的不重考了一遍, 才拿到6分.
下面是TWE的评分标准:
TOEFL Scoring Guide
Score of 6
A typical essay at this level:
effectively addresses the writing task
is well organized and well developed
uses clearly appropriate details to support a thesis or illustrate ideas
displays consistent facility in the use of language
demonstrates syntactic variety and appropriate word choice, though it may have occasional errors
Score of 5
A typical essay at this level:
may address some parts of the task more effectively than others
is generally well-organized and well-developed
uses details to support a thesis or illustrate idea
displays facility in the use of language
demonstrates some syntactic variety and range of vocabulary, though it will probably have occasional errors
Score of 4
A typical essay at this level:
addresses the writing topic adequately but may slight parts of the task
is adequately organized and developed
uses some details to support a thesis or illustrate an idea
demonstrates adequate but possibly inconsistent facility with syntax and usage
may contain some errors that occasionally obscure meaning
Score of 3
A typical essay at this level may reveal one or more or the following weaknesses:
inadequate organization or development
inappropriate or insufficient details to support or illustrate generalizations
a noticeably inappropriate choice of words or word forms
an accumulation of errors in sentence structure and/or usage
Score of 2
A typical essay at this level is flawed by one or more of the following weaknesses:
serious disorganization or underdevelopment
little or no detail, or irrelevant specifics
serious and frequent errors in sentence structure and usage
serious problems with focus
Score of 1
A typical essay at this level:
may be incoherent
may be undeveloped
may contain severe or persistent writing errors更多精彩文章及讨论，请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net