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Life could be so beautiful --- in the eyes of a 9-yr old girl

本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛This is a writing homework written by my daughter in 15 minutes. (We came to Canada >2 yrs ago).


Dear NM,

If you come to Toronto, we could go to lots and lots of places. Skating in the winter, biking in the spring, swimming in the summer. Leaves fall like rain when the wind blows in fall, and if you don't like that much homework, Toronto is a good place to come.

We could go to the CN Tower. It's the tallest free-stand tower in the world! When you go up on the elevator, your ears feel covered because of the speed. Your could see almost all of Toronto on the look-out.

We could go see all the red, orange and yellow leaves, just before they're about to fall, you could pick some, flatten them, when you take them out, you could use them as bookmarks, it's a beautiful sight, too.

In the winter, we could go skating inside or outside. Do you know how to skate? If you don't, I could teach you.

We could go biking along Lake Ontario, and stop for a picnic on the grass, with the soft wind blowing on your face.

We could go to the beach and swim in the lake, feed the birds that fly on top of your head, biking or roller-skating on the trail, once I ever saw a snake passing by. If you come, we could do all these things (without worrying about your homework).

Your (long left) friend, NN



------ I was not only surprised by her ability of writing, but also suddenly realized that life could be as beautiful as she wrote ........更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
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  • 枫下家园 / 家庭与子女 / Life could be so beautiful --- in the eyes of a 9-yr old girl
    本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛This is a writing homework written by my daughter in 15 minutes. (We came to Canada >2 yrs ago).


    Dear NM,

    If you come to Toronto, we could go to lots and lots of places. Skating in the winter, biking in the spring, swimming in the summer. Leaves fall like rain when the wind blows in fall, and if you don't like that much homework, Toronto is a good place to come.

    We could go to the CN Tower. It's the tallest free-stand tower in the world! When you go up on the elevator, your ears feel covered because of the speed. Your could see almost all of Toronto on the look-out.

    We could go see all the red, orange and yellow leaves, just before they're about to fall, you could pick some, flatten them, when you take them out, you could use them as bookmarks, it's a beautiful sight, too.

    In the winter, we could go skating inside or outside. Do you know how to skate? If you don't, I could teach you.

    We could go biking along Lake Ontario, and stop for a picnic on the grass, with the soft wind blowing on your face.

    We could go to the beach and swim in the lake, feed the birds that fly on top of your head, biking or roller-skating on the trail, once I ever saw a snake passing by. If you come, we could do all these things (without worrying about your homework).

    Your (long left) friend, NN



    ------ I was not only surprised by her ability of writing, but also suddenly realized that life could be as beautiful as she wrote ........更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
    • Cheerful
    • great work.
    • what a lovely girl!
    • I can't believe it's written by a 9 yrs' old girl, but looks like your girl is very sensitive., you better pretect her heart very well.:-)